Comments on: lyric check: A Safe Distance http://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance electronic indie piano pop Wed, 18 Jan 2012 18:01:27 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Brian Hazardhttp://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance#comment-1249 Brian Hazard Tue, 14 Dec 2010 03:59:00 +0000 http://colortheory.com/?p=2022#comment-1249 Perhaps, but it doesn't rhyme quite as well with "offstage." ;) Perhaps, but it doesn’t rhyme quite as well with “offstage.” ;)

]]> By: Matthttp://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance#comment-1248 Matt Tue, 14 Dec 2010 03:06:00 +0000 http://colortheory.com/?p=2022#comment-1248 I know this was posted forever ago, but just found it, I love it, the only thing i would change is instead of "age" - "time" seems like it could fit better. I know this was posted forever ago, but just found it, I love it, the only thing i would change is instead of “age” – “time” seems like it could fit better.

]]> By: Thomashttp://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance#comment-494 Thomas Sun, 11 Apr 2010 00:30:45 +0000 http://colortheory.com/?p=2022#comment-494 Just want to let even the german fans know, that I translated the Lyrics for the new album (maybe). You can read them here: http://www.colortheory.de/wordpressHope it could help!My favorite lyrics so far are: A Safe Distance Too Close Backseat Touch Just want to let even the german fans know, that I translated the Lyrics for the new album (maybe).
You can read them here: http://www.colortheory.de/wordpress

Hope it could help!

My favorite lyrics so far are:
A Safe Distance
Too Close
Backseat
Touch

]]> By: Brian Hazardhttp://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance#comment-491 Brian Hazard Fri, 09 Apr 2010 21:05:19 +0000 http://colortheory.com/?p=2022#comment-491 I felt I could do better than my first set of takes, so I tried again today. I changed every "from a safe distance" to "at a safe distance." It just seemed to flow better. Does that change the meaning to anyone? I felt I could do better than my first set of takes, so I tried again today. I changed every “from a safe distance” to “at a safe distance.” It just seemed to flow better. Does that change the meaning to anyone?

]]> By: Brian Hazardhttp://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance#comment-479 Brian Hazard Wed, 07 Apr 2010 22:07:14 +0000 http://colortheory.com/?p=2022#comment-479 Actually Thomas, I went to a lot more operas in my twenties than I do now! :)Thanks again for all the input! I think the lyrics are a go. I'm going to try a few takes this afternoon. Actually Thomas, I went to a lot more operas in my twenties than I do now! :)

Thanks again for all the input! I think the lyrics are a go. I’m going to try a few takes this afternoon.

]]> By: Jasonhttp://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance#comment-474 Jason Wed, 07 Apr 2010 00:12:04 +0000 http://colortheory.com/?p=2022#comment-474 Brian,I love the story in the lyrics. The scene you are trying to convey comes across very clearly! Brian,

I love the story in the lyrics. The scene you are trying to convey comes across very clearly!

]]> By: Thomashttp://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance#comment-473 Thomas Tue, 06 Apr 2010 22:41:22 +0000 http://colortheory.com/?p=2022#comment-473 I just can repeat: again very good lyrics. I like the lines and even the story they told us. It seems we're getting older now, Brian. In our twenties this would be a Rock-Concert, now it's an Opera ;) I just can repeat: again very good lyrics. I like the lines and even the story they told us.
It seems we’re getting older now, Brian. In our twenties this would be a Rock-Concert, now it’s an Opera ;)

]]> By: Brian Hazardhttp://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance#comment-472 Brian Hazard Tue, 06 Apr 2010 17:25:18 +0000 http://colortheory.com/?p=2022#comment-472 Thanks Patricia, thanks Breye! I actually did include melodic audio samples for the last couple lyric checks, but decided against it this time. So yeah, I can see how that would definitely help! I'll stick with it from now on. Thanks Patricia, thanks Breye! I actually did include melodic audio samples for the last couple lyric checks, but decided against it this time. So yeah, I can see how that would definitely help! I’ll stick with it from now on.

]]> By: Breye 7xhttp://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance#comment-471 Breye 7x Tue, 06 Apr 2010 17:15:49 +0000 http://colortheory.com/?p=2022#comment-471 I really love what you've done so far. Your work is always very thought out and inspiring. My issue is that I try to sing the lyrics in my head as if I had music to go with it and I don't. Ever since we did our last album "The Consequence" I look at everything in a producers view now. If I could hear it in a demo form with the music, I might have suggestions; because I could hear the dynamics you intend to use in the delivery of your vocals and the placement within the structure itself.On a side note, your website and the method of interactivity here is simply amazing. But coming from you Mr. Hazard. I should be surprised. ;) I really love what you’ve done so far. Your work is always very thought out and inspiring. My issue is that I try to sing the lyrics in my head as if I had music to go with it and I don’t. Ever since we did our last album “The Consequence” I look at everything in a producers view now. If I could hear it in a demo form with the music, I might have suggestions; because I could hear the dynamics you intend to use in the delivery of your vocals and the placement within the structure itself.

On a side note, your website and the method of interactivity here is simply amazing. But coming from you Mr. Hazard. I should be surprised. ;)

]]> By: Patricia Gnipperhttp://colortheory.com/lyric-check-a-safe-distance#comment-470 Patricia Gnipper Tue, 06 Apr 2010 17:14:43 +0000 http://colortheory.com/?p=2022#comment-470 The story makes total sense, I could visualize the scene perfectly, even though I don´t speak english very well. Now I'm very curious to hear the music (when it´s done!). The story makes total sense, I could visualize the scene perfectly, even though I don´t speak english very well. Now I’m very curious to hear the music (when it´s done!).

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